it was just a tad bit too long.. at first i was lawling but then it just got boring..
tis was ok
The graphics were good, good fps but it lacked storyline in my opionion and it wasnt funny at all
it was all good.. pretty wicked.. only one problem... no story.. plus large file size.. eek!! its nice to know u got that program thing of a magig.. but newgrounds isnt meant for some test area.. its meant for flash and other weird stuff.. anything but tests...
anyways.. the point is dont post tests or experiments on newgrounds okay? lol.. ok then..
also... the colors wernt a good selection..
Sorry but after knox submitted so many... claymation has lost its touch..
isnt that a christmas song...
Well , The credits music. Its also where some what of where the KJM logo desgin comes from. Thanks!
I havent gave a good review lately
Ok, my friend. Let me just start off with as you can see.. this is a long review.. very professional too even though your movie doesnt deserve it... lol.. jk... anyways... lets get too it
I love her boobs so thats automaticlly 5. now... the tweens werent so good.... eek... maybe you can increase frame rate..but that ruin the sound.. either ways the tweens could be better....AND the quality just sucked ass..
dont stretch images
dont over tween
dont setle for low.. get the best
... it was funny and all.. The back ground could be better and all.. umm what else... just keep up the work and stuff
Your "style " is pretty good already... umm instead of a voice over you could just put the thing in a box and tween/pan your image there...i dont know..
Yes... i dont appreaciate nerdy voices that much.. gives me the impression that you your self is nerdy... I like the action news though.. and how you paused some times..
get a voice actor if your seriuos other wise stay the same
It was funny.. i guess
and not a comedian so no advice
7... its my lucky number...
i kinda got bored after sound so.. i kinda quit.. nutin to right.. really
PRESS YES TO THE IF THE REVIEW IS HELPFU:L IF YOU THINK THIS IS INFORMATIVE AND IS VERY LONG...
lol. you take alot of advice from tutorials here. I remeber the rain layer in the ultimate tutorial and the hills and the bg tut.. lol preetyy cool
Actually, I didn't use a tutorial. sheesh
lol, pretty cool
Hey, that was nice. I saw the file size at 10 k though.. damn... that much for a flash?? i reccomend for that you create the talk things a layer, the bg a layer, the sprites a layer. just convert most of them to mc and place multople instances that way, it cuts back on size. and sound. you can compress by propeirties of the sound. For effect sounds go around 5-20khrtz and for songs go to 20-60 khrtz (i think it s kb or htz or somin like that.
I personally dont like sprites but this is good
The when they talk, the character... they... the whole entire box moves. Are you doing fbf?? dont!!! either way. make the whole thing a MC and create two layers in the MC. In one layer cut the mouth. Paste it in the other layer. Motion tween up and down to create the talk effect
I personally like the flow of this movie. The dialog was intresting. I always was sucked into it. I wanted to see what happens next.
Like i said above. I recomend you compress. For songs use mp3 and for unformatted sounds like talking and effects, use wav. i think in flash 8 you can do different song files like mp4... so on ( i dont alot )
I think the jesus joke was pretty cruel.... lol not really but (im a catholic) most of the violent scenes ( like a sprite animated explosion) werent that bad.
I recently learned how to make a replay button!! lol im not a good AS writer. HOWEVER!!! I absolutly love your preloader!!!! i love how you can click a button to skip the loading sequence half way. If you could, Send me an FLA of that. my email is
huntah17@ yahoo. com
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I laffed a ton!! this anim is short and sweet(yet size consuming) i love the jokes and how you gave a character for each person. How the skinny guy is a ADD type guy how the zealot(flashing dood: i no, its called somin different) is like arnuld shawearzenager.
Its really good........
SEND ME THE PRELOADER .FLA!!!
good work and make more
Lol...thanks man, but actually it's all recorded...it's not done with sprites, though I probably should to conserve filesizes :D Anywho, yeah, I'll actually teach you the AS in order to make a preloader like mine...It's not hard at ALL and all I know is timeline control...not even how to actually make a preloader dude...I just modded the NG one :D
Contact me over a MSG service so I can tell you how.
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